The Stroke

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The Stroke

Post by WIREMAN » September 14th, 2016, 12:46 am

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me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by judih » September 14th, 2016, 9:42 am

grateful for your description
still can't imagine
but getting a taste

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Re: The Stroke

Post by 68degrees » September 14th, 2016, 10:11 am

Love the nod to Bogart. Treasure of Sierra Madre one of the great ones.

"I think I'll go to sleep and dream about piles of gold getting bigger and bigger and bigger."

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Re: The Stroke

Post by revolutionR » September 14th, 2016, 10:40 am

Nice one....: Don't Bogart that poem, pass it over to me. 8)

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Re: The Stroke

Post by WIREMAN » September 14th, 2016, 11:18 am

a joint might be my demise in the state I'm in 8) .....vocals ain't bad these daze but I'm having trouble stringing thoughts and with my balance, so I'm still using a walker after 4 weeks for safety.....oh and I'm slower than molasses :lol: ......but all and all I feel blessed to be writing again :D and wire sculpting but it's still hard to write and draw........Judih, I had hankerings of the big one (via slurred speech) thought it would pass, then the big ba boom!
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Post by sasha » September 14th, 2016, 1:26 pm

love the artwork - sorta reminds me of Ugo Mochi... sorta
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Re: The Stroke

Post by judih » September 14th, 2016, 10:49 pm

mark - as long as you're coming out the other side, there's more to this story
remember how ram dass went through a stroke and recalibrated his perception of life and being.
the resurfacing of wireman (the book, or documentary)

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Re: The Stroke

Post by the mingo » September 15th, 2016, 8:32 am

What ?! there's going to be a book and a movie ? ! Maybe you could get Rising Appalachia to do the soundtrack ! 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by WIREMAN » September 15th, 2016, 12:25 pm

..you get it, why wouldn't you in fact....the jam of my mindset has to align for it to come out as a coming to a theatre near you :lol: ..... plus I'm just struggling with the stairs and baby steps right now...keeping the Bill Murray on thanks to my bro who's ex Navy, doesn't that figure
....... 8) oh sister in law too....this place is plenty gonzo for sure :D
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by the mingo » September 15th, 2016, 12:36 pm

WIREMAN wrote:..you get it, why wouldn't you in fact....the jam of my mindset has to align for it to come out as a coming to a theatre near you :lol: ..... plus I'm just struggling with the stairs and baby steps right now...keeping the Bill Murray on thanks to my bro who's ex Navy, doesn't that figure
....... 8) oh sister in law too....this place is plenty gonzo for sure :D
... yeah us boonies get ours and got ours sunrise to sunset - 8) 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: The Stroke

Post by saw » September 15th, 2016, 3:24 pm

good to know you can write and bend wire...now bend those restrictions....write an amazing ending..... 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: The Stroke

Post by dadio » September 25th, 2016, 4:27 pm

Something special in this poem. 8)

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Re: The Stroke

Post by WIREMAN » October 7th, 2016, 2:51 pm

.....thanks for reading Ton.....I'm dodging them slings and arrows and laughing it all the way these past 8 weeks...thankful for the wire and crazy words, I be..... 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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