you know what they say

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saw
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you know what they say

Post by saw » March 19th, 2017, 4:27 pm

my critics
said I turned
my back
on the sun
I had to
chuckle
'cause for me
it was still just
night time.
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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mnaz
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Re: you know what they say

Post by mnaz » March 23rd, 2017, 4:18 am

everything turning in cycles and circles like that, night, day, sun-dust and all the rest..
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Re: you know what they say

Post by the mingo » March 23rd, 2017, 12:33 pm

Righteous
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: you know what they say

Post by judih » March 24th, 2017, 12:52 am

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