Not Really Wading

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68degrees
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Not Really Wading

Post by 68degrees » October 6th, 2017, 5:19 pm

It wasn’t a river sound
and it wasn’t the river either.

Truth be told, I was a man alone,
pleased to find water aimless & cold.

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Re: Not Really Wading

Post by judih » October 7th, 2017, 12:25 am

a fast sketch that fills the senses

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Re: Not Really Wading

Post by saw » October 7th, 2017, 8:30 am

rivers of the mind flow just as powerful
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism

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