carnival eyes suspended in disbelief, groping curiosity...

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mtmynd
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carnival eyes suspended in disbelief, groping curiosity...

Post by mtmynd » October 29th, 2017, 10:24 am

carnival eyes suspended in disbelief, groping curiosity with writhing handshakes
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clown competition
ignites turmoil
transiting the moon
filled with oblique
shadows disguising
fear with mountains
of smiles stacked
high into the cloudiness
of permafrost...melting
down into the ponds
filled flowing craters,
drowning the carnival
of saint timothy's
review, public performance
questioning the hearts
of pirouetting divinity,
my shamelessness
triggers the pull
of full moons
beckoning desire
afire with love
love
love
set to the themes
of van morrison tunes

and the world just
stares and wonders
stares as cold as Neptune
eyes without tears
they wonder is wonder
is really worth wondering

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Re: carnival eyes suspended in disbelief, groping curiosity...

Post by saw » October 29th, 2017, 5:31 pm

psychedelic......stacked up smiles melting down on the carnival of life....needs some Peter Max animation.... 8)
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mtmynd
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Re: carnival eyes suspended in disbelief, groping curiosity...

Post by mtmynd » October 29th, 2017, 6:03 pm

saw wrote:
October 29th, 2017, 5:31 pm
psychedelic......stacked up smiles melting down on the carnival of life....needs some Peter Max animation.... 8)
I just might do my own animation... why bother Peter Max (born Peter Max Finkelstein, October 19, 1937).

At 80 (congratulations!) he doesn't need to do anything for me that he hasn't already done.

I have one of his t-shirts (still) [install emoji of choice here].../|\...

thanks for reading this.
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Re: carnival eyes suspended in disbelief, groping curiosity...

Post by creativesoul » October 31st, 2017, 5:03 pm

I love carnival eyes

Dripping water in his hair
The taste of nature on his lips

Carlos Santana on acid at Woodstock
Oh so yummy
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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