The Parcheesi Crows

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the mingo
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The Parcheesi Crows

Post by the mingo » January 28th, 2018, 7:13 am

if I play
parcheesi with her
I lose

she never resorts
to superstition
her strategies
are immaculate

even when I'm
sure of victory
she somehow gets
home before me
my men left
in the field
dead in their tracks
their eyes ate
by crows

Adam was created
from the ground
Eve was created
from Adam

of all mysteries
this might prove
greatest
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Re: The Parcheesi Crows

Post by sasha » January 29th, 2018, 12:29 pm

my daughter always whups my ass at checkers
I think my attention drifts during the game
she sees it
and moves in for the kill
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Re: The Parcheesi Crows

Post by still.trucking » January 31st, 2018, 12:24 am

We love them because they are not men
while we are grateful not to have been created woman
"Natural selection, as it has operated in human history, favors not only the clever but the murderous." Barbara Ehrenreich

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Re: The Parcheesi Crows

Post by the mingo » January 31st, 2018, 4:52 am

We love them because they are not men
while we are grateful not to have been created woman
<* 8) *>
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Re: The Parcheesi Crows

Post by mtmynd » February 12th, 2018, 10:13 am

still.trucking wrote:
January 31st, 2018, 12:24 am
We love them because they are not men
while we are grateful not to have been created woman
Profundity will get my approval every time.

Your two lines are profound, so much better than prolost, every time.
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Re: The Parcheesi Crows

Post by saw » February 12th, 2018, 2:58 pm

aah yes that feminine wile
that is intensely competitive
my ex was a fantastic ping pong player
even when she could have won without
a dramatic slam....she used the dramatic slam
to emphasize her victory
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: The Parcheesi Crows

Post by the mingo » February 13th, 2018, 3:45 am

she used the dramatic slam
to emphasize her victory
ain't it the truth, ain't it the truth - then there are the ones who are without drama, who just leave you standing there as the fact tears itself down your throat 8)
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