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creativesoul
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Post by creativesoul » April 11th, 2018, 6:52 pm

I used to wake up with an idea about that day
Age has me like wet color dripping on a virgin canvas
There is blood in my burns because I went to the gym-
My left foot hip and neck are an electrical experience


My spiritual life is much like a dog at the pound
I love all of you but I cannot take you all home
Baggage limit and prices going up
That right and wrong thing is absurd
Heaven and hell
Reward and punishment
I flog myself
I do not need a priest
I have a direct line

So I ask you -God- please can you help us? We are totally blowing it.
Where are the angels?
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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the mingo
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Re: Questions

Post by the mingo » April 11th, 2018, 11:25 pm

So I ask you -God- please can you help us? We are totally blowing it.
Where are the angels?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o8HtFHKGC4g
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

saw
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Re: Questions

Post by saw » April 12th, 2018, 8:01 am

great piece jana
thoughtful inquisition
our innate determination
for evidence, for explanations
that go beyond what we see with our eyes

" age has me like wet color dripping on a virgin canvas"..........superb
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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