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e_dog
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Post by e_dog » May 5th, 2005, 7:26 pm

traded in my razor blades
for a pen

they say creative expression
's better than self-
destruction

but it's not
exactly
working

'cause
you keep sending me
more

hester_prynne

Post by hester_prynne » May 7th, 2005, 1:47 pm

Return those blades to sender....plastic caps intact.....
A bed of roses is coming...but when, I can't be exact.....

good trade, that pen e-dog. I dig what you're doing with it very much! I can relate.......

smoochies
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Post by e_dog » May 7th, 2005, 2:30 pm

or, to step beyond self-indulgence toward politics, here's the third-world version:



we bent our swords
into plough shears

but it's no use:

you keep exporting
more swords

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Post by mousey1 » May 8th, 2005, 4:10 pm

I liked this very much!

It worked for me.

Thanks for the read.
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by izeveryboyin » May 11th, 2005, 2:36 pm

"cause you keep sending me more" that lie speaks volumes. So inquisitive, yet, stern, simple. I liked this piece. The simplicity, was marvelous b/c you could smell the complexities drooling on the screen and barking loudly underneath. Thanks for the read.

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Post by AQuestion » May 11th, 2005, 10:19 pm

I dug it.
Everything is surreal and i'm still not sure which decision I'll make.

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