the Hiatts

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saw
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the Hiatts

Post by saw » June 6th, 2018, 9:25 am

Lilly Hiatt talkin' NPR
appreciative artist
lilting country cuts
songs from trinity lane
a memory
from the night Bowie died
I'm thinking
'bout her father
how I used to rock my kids
to sleep
pirate radio
my sweet girl
after all this time
babes in tanned arms
eyes heavy from play
John had a few lullaby's himself
and I used them again and again
they worked for me
every night
the Hiatt touch
blinking eyes, then dreams
little heads
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: the Hiatts

Post by creativesoul » June 7th, 2018, 12:50 pm

Beautiful journey- like- a piano 🎹- each key seems to compliment the other- as do your words- take us with you to such a warm and golden place
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

saw
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Re: the Hiatts

Post by saw » June 8th, 2018, 9:45 am

thank you jana
appreciate the feedback
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

saw
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Re: the Hiatts

Post by saw » June 9th, 2018, 9:36 am

all the snippets of a life
unravel in peculiar moments
sparks of the past reveal themselves
as they please
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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