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creativesoul
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Mom

Post by creativesoul » August 24th, 2018, 8:22 am

She always had a picture
To show me
Always had to go somewhere
I was all about the toy store
I just wanted more

Maybe if I had not been in tow
I would know
Something about a spare tire
I had to admire my mom

She was never boring
And always interested
In whatever was alluring


Notice this’s
See that
Read this
That Bldg over there

I swear
I was just a kid
She lived on cookies
Coffee

I did not know I was hungry
I just got mad
Just wanted to go home

She felt my leash was too tight
I was a child that could not fight
The things that gave her delight

Over and over it made me uptight
Oh mommy you are so beautiful
I want to go to the toy store
Is that all right?

Sometimes I wish I may I wish I might
Tell you of the stars in my heart
The moon followed us to buy cream in the dark
For coffee
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

saw
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Re: Mom

Post by saw » August 28th, 2018, 9:42 pm

these mom poems are great accounts of your relationship
fresh and raw.....I feel like a fly on the wall
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Mom

Post by the mingo » August 28th, 2018, 10:47 pm

Oh mommy you are so beautiful
I want to go to the toy store
Is that all right?
* 8) *
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Mom

Post by creativesoul » August 31st, 2018, 4:33 pm

I left a painting I had done of my grandson
She painted him in a cage
We don’t do that in my little family
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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