Expletive Heartbreak
Gotta pain up my semi colon
it left me in a comma,
I was having quotations:
Did she question mark
what happened between
the parentheses..?
She took a dash
up her colon that
left her apostrophe
dangling participles.
My exclamation point
was left italicized,
my heart in brackets.
P.I.T.A.
Re: P.I.T.A.
Gotta leave vexations of mind
to those who lived before and
after Zen, the no-mind of mind.
It all makes no sense at all,
but obviously I'm confused.
to those who lived before and
after Zen, the no-mind of mind.
It all makes no sense at all,
but obviously I'm confused.
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theirishsea
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Re: P.I.T.A.
Love the poem. Punctuates the punctuation with hitherto unforeseen meaning.
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.
Re: P.I.T.A.
Many thanks, TIS! I was beginning to wonder if anyone would understand what I was doing.theirishsea wrote: ↑August 11th, 2019, 11:31 pmLove the poem. Punctuates the punctuation with hitherto unforeseen meaning.
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