powdered onto choppy lips

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wylde
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powdered onto choppy lips

Post by wylde » January 31st, 2020, 8:03 am

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this always becomes that


rocket eyeballs delivered
on a platter
sucked in absorption.
sand blasted out-lasted
spew roaming romans
romulus swallowing remus

in your blown up guts gusted
in gussets on my paupers sleeve

the loose thread hypnotises
lies
the pendulum slowing

a gift of god on holy knees
running fingers in rivers
supplanted in foreheads
hair
streaming

high-browse flames

calls palms to sockets

spanners wild
nuts bolting

coming undone in a doing
coming again
over the same
realisation of grains boiled

to a residue kiss

powdered onto choppy lips

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Re: powdered onto choppy lips

Post by judih » February 1st, 2020, 12:26 am

turbulence subsides
insanity resumes
poetry escape

thanks, wylde

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Re: powdered onto choppy lips

Post by saw » February 1st, 2020, 10:45 am

nice flow
would work I feel at an open mike
the wordplay and alliteration at times,
give movement, like a runaway truck...ha
I like it
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: powdered onto choppy lips

Post by mnaz » February 3rd, 2020, 12:50 am

Agree. A gift..

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Re: powdered onto choppy lips

Post by wylde » February 4th, 2020, 5:51 am

judih wrote:
February 1st, 2020, 12:26 am
turbulence subsides
insanity resumes
poetry escape

thanks, wylde
we need to dance and laugh
even during the apocalypse
that still belongs to us

thank you sister in creativity.
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Re: powdered onto choppy lips

Post by wylde » February 4th, 2020, 5:54 am

saw wrote:
February 1st, 2020, 10:45 am
nice flow
would work I feel at an open mike
the wordplay and alliteration at times,
give movement, like a runaway truck...ha
I like it
salute saw. the internal voice of delivering phonically mindpainted imagery.

just wish i was a jackson pollock. but i only have sound. but we use what we have.

thanks.
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Re: powdered onto choppy lips

Post by wylde » February 4th, 2020, 5:56 am

mnaz wrote:
February 3rd, 2020, 12:50 am
Agree. A gift..

meaningful value with a currency pocketed gratefully rockstar.
tks
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