After I Die ...

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the mingo
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After I Die ...

Post by the mingo » January 24th, 2023, 3:46 pm

... maybe I could get
re-inserted into my previous life
but in a supporting role
not as the main character
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: After I Die ...

Post by judih » January 24th, 2023, 10:59 pm

yeah, as a supportive friend! cool idea. I'll put a word in with the cosmic ringmasters

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Re: After I Die ...

Post by stilltrucking » January 24th, 2023, 11:41 pm

yes but you might need a new social security number.

liked this poem a lot, a gem 8)

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Re: After I Die ...

Post by the mingo » January 27th, 2023, 11:19 pm

Thx *judih* & *Jack* <*)(*>
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: After I Die ...

Post by mnaz » January 28th, 2023, 1:19 am

Man that would be amazing.
You could watch yourself from the other side of the stage, and I wonder if you'd recognize the character or the play.

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Re: After I Die ...

Post by stilltrucking » January 29th, 2023, 8:48 am

If I had one word to say how much I liked this poem of yours it would be...
Dino-esque 8) :D

liked it so much I had to reply twice :oops:

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Re: After I Die ...

Post by saw » January 29th, 2023, 2:32 pm

interesting concept
why not
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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