Holy Place

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sasha
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Holy Place

Post by sasha » May 14th, 2026, 12:59 pm

a sound
wind
soft, whispering
the trees

sun
warm & bright
then dim - cool
clouds

nearby, fluttering
a chickadee lands
for a closer look

eye to eye
a holy moment

pond
alive with noise
buzzing, trilling
dragonflies
red-wing blackbird
peepers

i am unnoticed
a holy moment

motion
milk snake
emerges, vanishes
now only grass

a rare glimpse
a holy moment

forest
needles, windfall
Canada mayflowers
wood thrush
ovnenbird
jays
so many holy moments
in this holy place
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"If one could deduce the nature of the Creator from a study of creation, it would appear that He has an inordinate fondness for beetles." -- evolutionary biologist J B S Haldane, (1892-1964)

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Re: Holy Place

Post by mnaz » May 14th, 2026, 2:27 pm

I've seen,
heard, felt,
holy moments
on hillsides,
mountainsides,
like wind through
creaking pines,
(a sound like a river),
like the cactus wren
on her saguaro perch,
who let me approach her,
like holy ringing silence
out in the big empty.

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Re: Holy Place

Post by stilltrucking » May 14th, 2026, 8:24 pm

"a good capture" dadio

the holy land is disapearing undertheir feet, jack neal and the us beatniks, in the now generation™

First I knew about the place came to me when I was sitting under the dinning room table in a house that used to stand in fells point in 1943
best way I know to keeep the feeling is to
k eep my expectcations lower than my gratude for life
iheardthat in a song from the republic of pleasure so it can't bewrong
And the days that I keep my gratitude
Higher than my expectations
Ah! Well, I have really good days
RWH

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Re: Holy Place

Post by saw » Yesterday, 8:07 am

I know this intimately ....

it comes when we humans don't make a sound
we just marvel at what is around us
it comes when we become one with nature
and I swear there are birds and animals
that are not afraid of the quiet man
the man who sits on a rock to feel the sun on his face
those holy moments of connection to the earth
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism

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Re: Holy Place

Post by sasha » Yesterday, 5:13 pm

Thanks, all - it's as close to prayer as I come. Not exactly what I was taught in Catechism, but a whole lot more fulfilling.
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"If one could deduce the nature of the Creator from a study of creation, it would appear that He has an inordinate fondness for beetles." -- evolutionary biologist J B S Haldane, (1892-1964)

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