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Post by YABYUM » July 6th, 2005, 2:25 pm

beauty often leads to a bus ride
new places with faces
new mouths utter new language
bottled rage walking cold gray
on francaise, sidewalks
beers in a sac on my back
crumpled poems
tossed
words lost
every step in all directions
man named michelle teaches me bricks
how they're made
how to lay em sraight
mountains climbed
offices cleaned during ghost hours
lots of drawers pulled open
searched and stolen
weed delivered
bottles must be returned
women dress like advertisements
all of this is seen
breathed in
music scene is fan fucking tastic
hard core punks and jazz and trance
a new tattoo entitled "chance" ...

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Post by Axanderdeath » July 6th, 2005, 5:52 pm

sweat I like this. Did not really know you were a punk rocker. I don't like th shit mostly any more. Where is this about, new york? any way I almost took thePleasantly surprised about the theme I thought all you people out on these sites were already jobbed up with computer gigs or something. Nice work.

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Post by YABYUM » July 6th, 2005, 6:14 pm

not a punk rocker.
i am a punk. i love to rock.
punk meaning that i am not afraid of those who say that humans should be strapped on, holding into beliefs set by religion and parental, govermental thinking.
this is a test of the emergency anarchist decision.

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Post by Axanderdeath » July 6th, 2005, 6:26 pm

"emergency anarchist decision"

you don't really believe that word "anarchist" do you.

The theory or doctrine that all forms of government are oppressive and undesirable and should be abolished.

but
there are other meaning for it too I just wanted to be a smart ass--but I still don't think it is possible.

you probally meant somehting more like this:

Rejection of all forms of coercive control and authority: “He was inclined to anarchism; he hated system and organization and uniformity” (Bertrand Russell).


I got those two from -- http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=anarchism%20

there was also:

Active resistance and terrorism against the state, as used by some anarchists.

that6s the one I like the most...

anarchism, I don't believe it could ever happen. And if it did I would be dead...

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Post by YABYUM » July 6th, 2005, 8:16 pm

an every day moment.
Montreal......

exiting that store on the corner of davaar and van horne
looking down, a french speaking boy who i had made eye contact with often says in french language some words i didnt know,
but he was tapping his heart and saying "an-are-shay?"
i knew it was the anarchist tattoo upon my chest in which he was reffering to. i stopped. three boys no older than 14 asking me in french to stop, stand still and explain that ink over my heart so i said poly-vous-anglais? one of the four youngsters said "we"
he asked me how old i was when i got the tattoo
i lied, i told him i was 16.
he translated to his little brothers
they smiled and spoke fast french
i looked at those boys and said
"so you know the sign of anarchy".
nods all around
i couldnt speak their native tongue
nor the two of three, mine.
so i just said, read books.
that boy who spoke english, i handed him my only copy of
Civil disobedience.
i think it was a good idea.

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Post by Axanderdeath » July 6th, 2005, 8:25 pm

YABYUM wrote:an every day moment.
Montreal......

exiting that store on the corner of davaar and van horne
looking down, a french speaking boy who i had made eye contact with often says in french language some words i didnt know,
but he was tapping his heart and saying "an-are-shay?"
i knew it was the anarchist tattoo upon my chest in which he was reffering to. i stopped. three boys no older than 14 asking me in french to stop, stand still and explain that ink over my heart so i said poly-vous-anglais? one of the four youngsters said "we"
he asked me how old i was when i got the tattoo
i lied, i told him i was 16.
he translated to his little brothers
they smiled and spoke fast french
i looked at those boys and said
"so you know the sign of anarchy".
nods all around
i couldnt speak their native tongue
nor the two of three, mine.
so i just said, read books.
that boy who spoke english, i handed him my only copy of
Civil disobedience.
i think it was a good idea.

Like the way you wrote the french speaking.

to pal on glay?

great I was thinking of doing

to com pron des?

we no

jis we come le aut-er Irvin Welsh ka ma de tun dialect danss fran sa?
thus spoke G.A.P.

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