My Blood in the God

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~K
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My Blood in the God

Post by ~K » October 3rd, 2004, 7:28 am

This is
my world,
is it not?

Mine to survey
and explore
mine to conquer
or ignore,

mine to
transform.

This is

my perspective,

my angle,

my tangled corner.

This is:

my whisper
in the wind

my drop
in the flood

my blood
in the God.

This is
my contributuion
to the future;

this endless
string of questions,

still begging to be answered.

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Doreen Peri
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Post by Doreen Peri » October 3rd, 2004, 11:38 am

nope, sorry k
it's MINE!
LOL!
hehe

seriously though...enjoyed this....

"my angle,
my tangled corner"

very nice

and the echoes in

"my drop in the flood,
my blood in the God"

is really good....

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Post by mtmynd » October 3rd, 2004, 12:59 pm

nice one, ~K. I enjoyed the flow.

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