My belief could kick your belief's ass.

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Rat Bag
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My belief could kick your belief's ass.

Post by Rat Bag » July 24th, 2005, 7:35 am

Yes
the world is sad

it’s all

my belief is this
no, this is my belief
no, I believe this
no, this I believe
no

when it could be

so much simpler

my belief is this
yes, and this is my belief
yes, and that’s how it is
yes
This is the centre of the universe.
My tribe is gathered around me.
Behold me.
I AM.

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Post by judih » July 24th, 2005, 8:39 am

be
and beliefs will come and go
be
and be all you are
and beliefs will catch up with ya

good to see ya bein nick

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Post by iblieve » July 24th, 2005, 3:09 pm

all i can say is iblieve and nice poem.
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Post by hester_prynne » July 25th, 2005, 8:44 pm

I"ll chime in too....I dig this un!

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Post by joel » July 30th, 2005, 10:16 pm

great case for differentiation. :) forgive me for the times i forget that i believe what i believe and that i don't know it. :roll: humilty seems to come so much sweeter in verse.
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