Shut Up Still Trucking

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stilltrucking
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Shut Up Still Trucking

Post by stilltrucking » August 1st, 2005, 5:17 pm

Many a man has travelled this road
Faced all the troubles and took all the blows
Shut up stilltrucking I am bored with your blues
Now you try to tell me the path I should chose.
Don’t live in the future
Don’t dwell in the past
You can’t be the first
And you won’t be the last
Give up your complaining and constant bad news
Shut up still trucking
I am bored with your blues
jitterbug

hester_prynne

Post by hester_prynne » August 1st, 2005, 11:28 pm

No don't shut up,
don't talk that way,
I couldn't take it
without a dose of you
each day,

jus keep on truckin
with that mystery pen,
it's a big part of what
keeps me
comin back here again.

You rock still. I dig your writing, your contributions.
Some of the links you've shared have been the best I've ever encountered....!
really!
:D
H 8)

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Post by iblieve » August 2nd, 2005, 1:26 am

I' with hester, keep truckin my friend and may your muse always share its blues with us. "C"
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Post by tinkerjack » August 2nd, 2005, 11:37 am

without a dose of you
Don’t worry about it. Jimbo can probably get you a shot of penicillin. No seriously I don’t think I have anything fatal. Practically a virgin again. :shock:

thanks for the kind words

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