Sunset purple voids

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hester_prynne

Sunset purple voids

Post by hester_prynne » August 2nd, 2005, 10:41 am

Scarf,
sunglasses,
cigarette dangle.
Small car,
convertible,
top down mama.
Ridin up the road,
past behind me,
zipper half undone.
Up ahead,
empty mirages.
Sunset purple voids,
for me to draw on.

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Post by stilltrucking » August 2nd, 2005, 11:42 am

Sunset purple voids,
for me to draw on.
sigh

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I been foolin around with differed ID's for different folks. Gypsjoker about about a man who has lost everything. Maybe the hardest to bear was losing the road. So I am going to make him blind and see how he deals with that.
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tinkerjack is for the shiksa who was so stupid about executions the queer sultry New York summer day they execucted the rosenbergs.
if her daughter don't mind I call the blonde bitch my muse. (so the professor's wives called her)

tinkerjack and the scarlet letter I did a cut and paste of tinker jack and The Scarlet letter. amazing to how paralell they are.

I have edited this about six times. but no more 11:11amcst

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Post by mtmynd » August 2nd, 2005, 12:22 pm

i dropped some purple void
passed on by a runniing man
giant burger, berkeley california
circa nineteen seven oh!

volkwagen covertible
top down, breeze up
headin' north
wine country
free tastes at every
winery from here to there

hittin' the funny smoke
no joke
easy toke
completely broke
but rich with memories
fading
f...a...d...i...n...g
f
a
d
i
n
g
...into the
purple void....

[sunset swallowed]

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Post by stilltrucking » August 2nd, 2005, 1:32 pm

through the window pane
a bedroom scene of spider love
a purple haze and micro .
and orange sunshine
blot my sins when mr natural keeps on trucking
cactus Cleansing the best place I have ever been
blue fungus fantasies chilled to the bone snake goddess dances
and you might see me with an illegal smile sometimes, like now.


but really
high on the real thing
purple sage sunsets, pacific dreams, and #2 diesel is all I need



adios for awhile

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Post by e_dog » August 2nd, 2005, 8:15 pm

the days of free
purple wine
tastings
are mostly gone
now
you gotta pay
even at the vineyards
but

not for
the sunsets
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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Post by stilltrucking » August 2nd, 2005, 11:14 pm

we got to something about those free sunsets
sounds un-american to me


after a life time of watching it rise from the Atlantic
an uncanny feeling to see it sink into the Pacific

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Post by Doreen Peri » August 2nd, 2005, 11:26 pm

reminded me of "Thelma and Louise"... ever see it? No wait! Your poem said the dude's zipper was down. I don't think that happened in T&L ... no wait! That wasn't a dude! That was a mama... and maybe it was the zipper for the top... lol

Man o man, i'd love to have a convertable...

always have wanted one....

hey, it's mid-life crisis... might be the time to do it!

I could get in debt over my head
for a Mercedes or a Porsche.
Jet black, baby, of maybe red!
Top down crash coursh.
I could pick up hitchhikers
On the way –
Flirt with bikers.
Whaddya say?

hester_prynne

Post by hester_prynne » August 3rd, 2005, 1:46 am

I'm there! Let's go Doreen. Damn, t'would be fun! Into the sunset purple voids....

the past behind us, is a zipper half undone.....!

Time to go for it!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Thanks you guys for your cool responses.....someday i hope we can all watch a sunset together......
(dreamy sigh)

H 8)

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Post by mnaz » August 3rd, 2005, 1:47 am

Two of my faves...

Sunset purple and a ragtop ride.

I miss that '71 Skylark of mine...

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