I Hate The Sky

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Dandylion
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I Hate The Sky

Post by Dandylion » July 29th, 2005, 1:32 pm

Angels fall
From heaven
Dropping to the ground,
Shattering like glass.

The earth quakes
Under the pressure
And I try in vain
To pick up
The pieces.

Feathers on the road
Remains of the decay.
I walk among the shards
Of dreams
And my blood runs in the gutter.

I hate the sky
Under no circumstance should I be trusted.

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Post by stilltrucking » July 30th, 2005, 3:36 am

I hate you. But that it is just envy speaking.
Nice work!!

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Post by Dandylion » July 30th, 2005, 3:58 am

to be envied is a great compliment...thank you!
Under no circumstance should I be trusted.

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Post by iblieve » August 6th, 2005, 7:19 pm

Well I love ya baby and your muse, another fabulous write dear and yea Soemtimes I hate the sky too, or at least the bird shit that falls on me. Glad you made it to Studio 8 to check up on me. Your "C"
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Post by hester_prynne » August 6th, 2005, 8:23 pm

This is a quiet, beautiful, gentle roar.
Beautiful.
There is definitely magic in this poem.
The last verse absolutely makes it shine......

H 8)

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Post by YABYUM » August 6th, 2005, 10:10 pm

angels sounds
I hear knees
hitting earth
I see wings of those
beer splash
drips like tears

When an angel takes a knee
perhaps happenings
could have been discussed with GOD

instead, Nephlem
correct me if wrong i spelt
but they did love human woman
god bless that desire?.........................................
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Post by mtmynd » August 7th, 2005, 2:40 pm

I hate dust storms screwing up the sky.
I hate dreary days when the sky is hidden by dark clouds.
I hate when the sky hasn't been clouded by clouds in weeks,
I hate when the sky turns black
...but of course I love the sky, too
I'm a sky pilot :wink:

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