three short cliches

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joel
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three short cliches

Post by joel » October 15th, 2005, 4:34 am

When I set off on pilgrimage,
was it for hope or self I went?
When I set off on pilgrimage
I thought I was intelligent
to seek some holy heaven-sent.
I thought that I was competent
when I set off on pilgrimage.
Was it for hope or self I went?

***

Acrobatic, you hanged and you swung
with a nonchalant carelessness flung
from your glance, Poet Eyes;
what romance of surprise
could despise the demise it had sung?

***

Patty-cake till my hands, clapped and raw,
made a frame for O Wonder I saw—
paint-stroke brush of that star
the horizon by far
rebirthed joy in the drop of my jaw.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by Dixie » October 15th, 2005, 1:03 pm

all 3, much enjoyed

hester_prynne

Post by hester_prynne » October 15th, 2005, 3:35 pm

Fabulous, all three.
I could read these all day Joel.
for hope, and/or self.

H 8)

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