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Post by Doreen Peri » October 16th, 2005, 4:50 am

I once left Hell City
on the wing of a wild falcon.
I entrusted my exit to his soar.
His talons bore deep into a
sleep slope when he landed,
his crag, my new home.
But when I arrived,
I was petrified, his savage
eyes pierced my side,
I bled from the head
as his beak pounded
my skull with fury and
frantic poke! Violent was
his untamed frenzy!
He was a savage beast!

I learned a lesson from
this adventure.
Never flirt with heaven.
Hades is illusion, created
in a mind!

Blind is the seeker
of paradise!
Look inside!
It is where
you reside!

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Post by WIREMAN » October 16th, 2005, 8:44 am

kinda like that home
i was always searchin
for, found out the only
place it could be was
inside of me.............

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I like this very much

Post by Who Am I? » October 16th, 2005, 12:05 pm

very awesome poem, and a great message.

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Post by Dixie » October 16th, 2005, 1:02 pm

you said it just perfectly!

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Post by Doreen Peri » October 16th, 2005, 5:01 pm

Thanks much WiredOne, Dixie, and Who Am I for confirming what we all knew already. ;)

I sorta feel like Dorothy......

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