I took you...

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joel
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I took you...

Post by joel » November 21st, 2005, 5:36 pm

I took you for my soul
but then transcribed as I saw fit
in ways to match my wit
and placed you underneath my feet—

I took you for my sole
and laced you on my troubled walk
and you began to stalk
with me—and so you stalked yourself—

I took you for my sole
desire; delight; delicious dream—
I made you what I seem
to need and want and go beyond—

I took you for my soul:
to be or just to complement—
and so you compliment
not pride nor love, but hope for growth.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

mtmynd
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Post by mtmynd » November 22nd, 2005, 11:05 am

nicely put, joel...

the words
flow
connect
express
from the soul

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