Posing for a photo by the window

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Posing for a photo by the window

Post by mpc » November 28th, 2005, 8:09 pm

click. arch. click. living
heat done artist-ice, a border
of gold leaf, a hammering beat,
a tv without need, a signal,
a pulse, a click-arch-
CLICK! her hair, a
sculpture of air, is there
a there to augment the here.
the shore is behind the glaze. i
can't see her face. glass.
her waist. her silhouette,
a triumph, a wave. click-arch.

click.

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Post by tinkerjack » November 30th, 2005, 4:12 am

click, click
:D
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Post by mpc » December 5th, 2005, 6:19 pm

Thanks, tj (not tijuana). This one came out after seeing a really cool, really sexy photo of someone I will never meet.

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Post by tinkerjack » December 5th, 2005, 6:42 pm

mtmynd sent me one of his collages (spelling?) someone I will never meet, I can almost bring it all to mind, this woman with the greenest eyes and perfect knees, a mirror, relected young child on stairs, a reptile, a banner "all these things can live in harmony" a bunch of other images I forgot, lost it on a hard drive. I have between 15 and twenty hard drives. Maybe I still got it. I backed up somewhere I think. Maybe he will take a hint if he sees this. anyway I did not mean to digress or maybe I did
I got a bumper sticker that says
"New Jersey. You got problem with that?"

I liked it a lot
just did not know what to say
a trucker thing about click click, two clicks of a cb microphone
got it
thanks
high praise requires no words sometimes.
***********
added after orignal post
more recovered details from memory
mtmynd's collage, a table, a map, books, a globe, a bird,
like a pop quiz for eidetic memories.

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(not tijuana).
never been there
Spent a lot of time trashing around (truckstops) Nogales, and Laredo but no it is jacktilles
done
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Post by mpc » December 6th, 2005, 2:15 pm

That sounds like a pretty cool collage.

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Post by tinkerjack » December 6th, 2005, 2:59 pm

CL is a presence here like some sugar cube with a density greater than my solar system. He warps the space around studio eight.

I have always thought of gravity as pulling force, pulling me down the west bound lane on donner at thirty two feet per heart beat squared, But now I read somewhere that uncle Albert meant more like it curves the space between two objects.

I don't remember seeing you around, you write a nice curve :?:
I mean it is fun to read

Ten four cool collage, woman's face eidetic sensory data that was immediately objectified. I wonder where he snipped it from. I bet it was from a glossy corporate initial public offering for a new non profit oil company that was going to feed the hungry, educate every child, and get big government off our backs NGO.

oiy vey
hijack strikes again.

nice piece good work
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Post by mpc » December 6th, 2005, 7:42 pm

I'm shed off the amoeba known as PIP. I haven't been on poetry sites in years, but a friend convinced me to join up here.

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