Drugs and Doughnuts

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ButtercupNutSwirlz
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Drugs and Doughnuts

Post by ButtercupNutSwirlz » February 19th, 2006, 2:06 pm

Heavily sedated
I staggered to the window
and gazed out at Mars
I saw red
and two moons
who knew
there would be
bums in outer space
Grabbing a cigarette from my pocket
I lit up
and coughed a breath
Groggily I faced my situation
and wondered
how the hell I got into this mess

If I ever get to heaven
if I ever get to Rome
will the Creator bolt and lock the door
and make me do it all again
Christ I hope not
I barely survived the first time
Well there's always drugs and doughnuts
Neil Sedaka and Joni Mitchell
to see me through
I woke up screaming
to the lovely strains
"I've looked at life
from both sides now"
and sure enough
it was raining

hester_prynne

Post by hester_prynne » February 19th, 2006, 5:31 pm

I dunno.
I just plain dig this.
All over.....

:D

H 8)

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Post by stilltrucking » February 20th, 2006, 9:01 am

I know how I got in this mess
as if that is any consolation :
it is a dam good joke
always leave them laughing when you go
....
"I've looked at life
from both sides now"
and sure enough
it was raining
I dig your stuff
just a fan
nothing personal
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Post by Ann Bingham » February 20th, 2006, 9:45 am

"who knew
there would be
bums in outer space"

:o

like this.

love lots
Deb.

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Post by iblieve » February 20th, 2006, 4:23 pm

This is a masterpeice and an all time favorite of mine. The playful word crating made this a delight to read. "C"
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Post by ButtercupNutSwirlz » February 23rd, 2006, 2:15 pm

Thank-you very much all for reading and finding something to like.

I enjoyed writing this, it was fun, and it's delicious icing on the cake when it's enjoyed by others in turn.

I :) appreciatively.

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