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~K
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Fuck it

Post by ~K » March 31st, 2006, 10:12 am

You can
not drop
a ball
you
never caught,

& why this gives
me comfort,

I don't know.

No. I don't know much
at all but I like
the sound of your voice &
the way it doubts me.

The pallet
for your opinions
shatters
my protests.

You win
again.

The only
one in the room
who couldn't care less.

Yeah, I guess
you taught me
something.

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Ann Bingham
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Post by Ann Bingham » March 31st, 2006, 2:04 pm

this is beautiful and sad.

"...but I like
the sound of your voice &
the way it doubts me...."


love lots

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tinkerjack
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Post by tinkerjack » March 31st, 2006, 8:19 pm

this is beautiful and sad.
I suppose it must be a chick thing Ann

I find it just beautiful and gentle on my mind
As if she can see right through me
A comfort for me to be transparent
It is a voice I have working at on line since about 2000 I think, here and on that other place that treated many of us here on S8 like red headed orphans.


I never knew if ~k was a man or woman.

~k nice work
gracias
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I used to be smart

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mousey1
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Post by mousey1 » April 1st, 2006, 1:17 pm

Every word a sharp little arrow
a dart of truth


I especially found the following two deeply touching...
I like
the sound of your voice &
the way it doubts me.

The only
one in the room
who couldn't care less.
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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muted
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Post by muted » April 9th, 2006, 2:55 am

I chose swallowed pride
over the taste of your lips
and through absence
your heat lingers
perfumed with your breath
nearer me with every memory
of what could have been
and what may eventually be...

to care more or less
is insignificant
when overwhelming
is the only emotion
I have for you.

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~K
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Post by ~K » May 3rd, 2006, 9:35 am

Irresistible

We are rumors
just waiting to happen.

We are nature's servants.

Wherever we connect
we are rebels finding
pleasure in their chains.

When we come to understand
the meaning of freedom
it's useless to struggle
but we do it anyway.

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Axanderdeath
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Post by Axanderdeath » May 13th, 2006, 3:22 pm

I can not explian why I like this. But what it is I like. No comments but that it screams the human exprience--I guess in a way--that is kind of an easy way out, what eles do we know but the human exprience..
thus spoke G.A.P.

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