To Ghazal Luna

[joel]

Demure and distant: poor excuses when you break your crystal gaze.
In shameful negativity, you spin and shake your crystal gaze.

Cross crater-depth deflected eyes, you drag, you rake each fickle phase.
Anorthositic haunt reflections: wan you stake your crystal gaze.

The sight, young night when first we kissed, cannot forsake or more amaze.
My eyes are open when we kissed, full moon partake your crystal gaze.

What regimented form, ballet: o turns to ache, relations raze.
Staid seated in your audience, you’ll soon remake your crystal gaze.

Dream turns in tortured new moon sleep; Regret awakens new malaise.
Dreams melancholy shiver in the dark to quake your crystal gaze.

I love the thought: We once were one; but forced, we take our separate ways.
If I’m but dust, yet suffer me to ever make your crystal gaze.

[lenny]

Oh man, this stikes too close to home. You are indeed a talented writer but the liquid emotions that blur my vision at the moment disallow any further comment. Thanks for sharing...I think. Sigh. Smigh. Smile.

lenny