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[Axanderdeath]

hey how are you
did youthink of this before
maybe I don't love you

17 year old girl
smokes crack
I was asleep at home
5 years ago
broke her heart
but now it's me
wasting away

in 94 we did acid
I dug a whole in the ground
I found money
we drank cheap wine and
had orgies in parks
she cried while I fucked her best friend
she wanted me to love her
but now she is me

now it is me
on the phone
all alone
home

now it is me
in love with indiffernce
left behind
with no meaning
trying not to love in this love dead world.

[lilywhite]

fantastic write on what goes around comes around. This one is well organized.

[joel]

awesome write.

[Axanderdeath]

why do you both call it a "write"?

[mnaz]

because you wrote.

[stilltrucking]

there is always bathtubs and toasters

better to keep on writting

because there is a chance of grace

when what goes round don't come round

I don't know

melancholy youth

it beats me Geoff

I did not like this one as much as the Matilda "write"

but I am the old man out

or maybe you hit to close to home

it was well done Geoff, I suppose when I read it the first time I felt it all too well

keep on writing