It didn't

Post your poetry, any style.
Post Reply
User avatar
joel
Posts: 1877
Joined: June 24th, 2005, 8:31 am
Location: Hampton Roads, Virginia

It didn't

Post by joel » May 12th, 2006, 12:25 pm

It didn’t seem a poor idea when
I ran in sneakers half a size too small
I’d bought while on vacation when I’d left
my best-fit shoes some half a continent
away— It didn’t seem so ill thought out
when barefoot (since I had no proper socks)
I set to break new sneakers in with mile
on mile of sweat and speed. And all the while
I ran, my logic swelled unorthodox
as blisters all about my feet, about
the friction loci lovely imminent.
Was I at all aware how slyly deft
such situation metaphor would fall
upon my heart to muse your love again?
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

User avatar
Traveller13
Posts: 324
Joined: March 14th, 2005, 4:16 am

Post by Traveller13 » May 12th, 2006, 4:30 pm

Are those tyre tracks?
[i]~"Open your eyes, and open your eyes again"[/i]

Post Reply

Return to “Poetry”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 1 guest