"Na,

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"Na,

Post by Arcadia » May 29th, 2006, 7:50 pm

(die Woche fangt gut an" /the a of fangt with two points above/)

I don't have pain in my knees
my back and my ankles hurt
(specially the right one)
and the dojo's dog barks
(only for a moment)
from the other side of the door

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Post by creativesoul » June 3rd, 2006, 4:21 am

i get the feeling about where you live, it is good thanx for your support

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Post by Arcadia » June 8th, 2006, 1:02 pm

support?
reading is free, thanks for reading!

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Post by ~K » June 23rd, 2006, 7:18 am

this leaves me wanting more...

what happened after the dojo's dog barked?

& who is this dojo person & what is the door to you?

Do you have pictures?

:D

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Post by Arcadia » June 25th, 2006, 3:59 pm

no pictures by myself K, just zazen rests! (I expected the dog continue barking but after a big noise only my aking body was there).

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