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mnaz
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write home

Post by mnaz » July 1st, 2006, 5:40 am

can i write, on the lam?
can i write poetry when it's beaten out of me?
can i summon shade out of moon rock,
or tranquil shades of tranquil,
where rivers waste their time?
how could I write home,
cozy up with metaphor,
when rivers must answer for their crimes?

i'll be home soon.
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Post by stilltrucking » July 1st, 2006, 6:09 am

can i summon shade out of moon rock,
or tranquil shades of tranquil,
where rivers waste their time?
pretty
nice
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mnaz
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Post by mnaz » July 2nd, 2006, 3:16 am

no one writes home anymore.
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Post by stilltrucking » July 2nd, 2006, 6:43 am

just stay home
you won't have to write
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Post by Arcadia » July 2nd, 2006, 9:43 am

can i write, on the lam?

I like this line!
saludos,

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