Pride

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mnaz
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Pride

Post by mnaz » July 15th, 2006, 1:55 am

the enigma.
which is it? up, down?
it keeps the house clean,
and goeth before a downfall.

which is it?

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Post by judih » July 15th, 2006, 2:03 am

pride!
the double-edged sword
you feel it - you swell
you know you're in trouble

vanity is the thing that keeps me down
oops, pride in understanding

a pendulum ride - back and forth
on the way, it's a high
when you get there, it's too late
back you come

a fun-house ride through an obstacle course
Pride sells you a ticket
pride keeps you seat-belted
Pride sends you home
head in hands

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Post by Arcadia » July 15th, 2006, 9:26 am

great poem judih! I hope you're ok.

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Post by abstroint » July 15th, 2006, 10:07 am

"a pendulum ride"

Great metaphor for pride

Yeah, hope your doing ok. The news, the news…I send hope for everyone’s well being. I don’t know that it’s doing much good but I’ll keep trying.

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Post by judih » July 15th, 2006, 3:02 pm

hitching a ride on mnaz's great thought.
thanks arcadia and abstroint - the a's of aesthetics.

here it's the usual shit - up north, things are a little more volatile.
peace jam. dor's got a peace jam in mind. proud to say that dor's got her eye on pr'eye'd.

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