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abstroint
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Gone Hunting

Post by abstroint » July 28th, 2006, 9:25 am

Who am I to care?
Her felony doesn’t affect me
His lack of experience isn’t mine
He has to bring his young son to interviews
She is too nervous for something new after 29 years
Cut
Her life devoted to the company
Cutting heads for profit
His experience turned away because he hasn’t worked in the last six months
She is asking too many questions
If they are interested they will direct you
Can I shout in here?
Can I? And still be stripped
Rebuilt
Polished into their latest
Greatest machine
Don’t give any direction
They may take it as leadership skills
You don’t want to steal her next 29 years
Be meek yet confident
Confident that you can take direction
Temporary direction
Temp
I’m temporarily in your service
I’ve passed the personality tests
The mechanical, troubleshooting and
Mathematics scores are excellent
Always calm confident
Excellence in all
I do want
Temporary placement
There is a kindness given to me I didn’t see before
The scores of tests proved excellence
Please can I tell
Her to relax if you’re too nervous you won’t pass their tests
Test me
They tested me and
I know exactly what they want
They want me
They want me to answer their questions with
What they want to hear
Add creative calming flare
I assure you
I assure you as if you were my only love
I assure you I will please you
As you are
What you want
What you need
You will receive
I will be your whore
Temporarily satisfying your every need
What do I care?
The others can’t read how easy you are to please
I do
I don’t have time to be placed in
The position of their power
The position to empower them to
Teach them to please you
Satisfaction everyone wants
Be you male
Or female
A freak who knows
To keep their cool when they’re being watched
Relax
They need you more than
You need them
Relax this isn’t about you
Relax so you can
Read their wants
Relax
Guaranty their satisfaction with you’re confidence showing
Not saying
Showing
I can guaranty your every desire shall be satisfied beyond what you imagine
I will
Take your bar and set it higher than your imagination dreamed
It WILL
Reach higher than
All the rest
You want me
You got me
Temporarily
Why can’t they see these people who are making them beg are
Just pimping their services
They need you more than
You need them
I can empathize
Food
Shelter but
They need you
Don’t beg
They need at the least
A whore who can relieve a little tension
You don’t have to take them to ecstasy but
You do have to loosen some tension
Relax
Pimps will kiss your ass
When they see the dollar signs in your confident competence
They are kissing MY ass!
Pay attention bitch before you get slap
Watch carefully while you look at me wondering why they’re treating me so fine
You want to sit in the front bitch?
You shut off your nerves and just fucking perform
Sister I’m not worried about those dumb ass men someone will put the brutes to work
You on the other hand better learn that you can’t even metaphorically blow someone with you’re mouth running constantly
Sweetness
Shhhhhhh
I’m over here trying to get her clit hard with my voice and you’re distracting her
Shhhhh
If not for yourself
For me
Please
Stop stressing my pimp
I just want to get home to my ho
Home
To my
Satisfaction
I just want to get home
Soon

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Post by stilltrucking » July 28th, 2006, 10:54 am

my eyeballs are agog
this poem blew me away
I am temporarily wordless 8)

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Post by abstroint » July 28th, 2006, 11:51 am

Still
On my way I saw you
So black you’re blue
Still so strong
You walking
Head still held high
Bold and beyond beautiful
You still walking on
The streets we walked to get to school
“You better come back for me.”
I am
For you
Still so smooth
I know you’re still straight
I won’t tell who I saw walking
First girl who
Kissing you still so smooth
Walking still poor
Walking strong still so beautiful
For you
I am
Still
Calm in your words still
Of course I will come back
To you
And you still so tall
And the years so unkind still
Look good on you
I drove by
Today
I will come back still
I will come back around
I am here still
For you
Who still walks so bruised blue
Years in darkness fought year’s still poor cause
They don’t see still you illuminating light still
Strong beautifully confident
Smooth flowing walking tall still
Unbroken by the years still
You walking
For you
I am still and back
For you and yes
For that smile
Anything
Still

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Arcadia
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Post by Arcadia » July 28th, 2006, 1:22 pm

wow!!

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stilltrucking
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Post by stilltrucking » July 28th, 2006, 4:54 pm

you honor me.

thank you

dear sister

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cool

Post by creativesoul » July 30th, 2006, 2:17 am

i feel the walk, it is beautiful

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Post by hester prynne » July 30th, 2006, 3:44 pm

down to the minutest of detail,
a subtle victory speaks.
I say amen.

fantastic!
:shock:
H 8)
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Post by lenny » July 31st, 2006, 9:42 am

Be true to thyself...the rest then falls into place so naturally. Thanks for sharing.

lenny
None of us ever gets anything we don't either need or deserve. Dry those liquid emotions and move on.

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