Crystallized Crumbs

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Crystallized Crumbs

Post by judih » September 29th, 2006, 1:14 am

when lost children
leave crystallized crumbs
on a trodden forest trail
sunlight teardrops shine tomorrows
moist heaving hearts
beams of crow and sapphire
deep resonant drums beckon motion

and following the chant of the moment
lost children reclaim family
home of treehouse clarity
transported in a wheel of nowhere fast

leaving crystallized crumbs
yesterday sighs with patience
future is nothing without past



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Post by Doreen Peri » September 29th, 2006, 1:33 am

and when the child
leads you back to
yourself, you follow,
up the garden path,
down into the hollow
past, each bead
dropped, a vast
intention


(thank you, judih.. fine piece)

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Post by judih » September 29th, 2006, 3:07 am

stringing thoughts like amber stroked horizons
brushed hair aligned in tiers
terraced platforms, budding combustions
blossoming epiphanies, inwardly blown

a pause on a landscape
sketched in parchment
torn from a book not yet revealed

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Post by panta rhei » September 29th, 2006, 4:18 am

leaving crumbs
of fresh bread
behind us
we wander on
following the path
into the unknown

we leave a substantial
trace behind

the road unfolds
ahead of us

in our hands
the warm bread
smells of now
and within the chewing
fe feel safe

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Post by judih » September 29th, 2006, 5:55 am

if i close my ears
i hear the inner chomp of crystallized chews
you and me
wheat
reunion, gathering strength
we listen to the chance ahead

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Post by joel » September 29th, 2006, 6:14 am

if i attempt a cosmic
navigation
through deepest kisses
--cutting newest teeth of teething infancy--
what crystal explorations
might reveal
across a threshold soul

an inner revelation
of a hardness moments take
of a sharpness' crystal break
of a stress for crystal sake
of formality at stake
of a multi-facet wake from slumber ease
and pleasing curiosity to slake
a curious thirst

a curious thirst
discernment yet for evidence
of chances yet ahead
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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