Valentine Poem to Doreen

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Lightning Rod
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Valentine Poem to Doreen

Post by Lightning Rod » February 14th, 2007, 10:03 pm

It rained hearts last night
you thought it was just noise
but they were crystaline hearts
falling forever falling against our window

I stomped you a valentine in the snow
since we couldn't go out for dinner and a show
we are frozen in, you see, locked in ice
but let me be crystal clear, concise

My love for you is slow as global warming
sure as the rotation of the globe
I love to see the glaciers thawing
I love to see you shed your robe

My heart is a little throbbing thing
but it is yours to do with what you will
we don't know what the Spring will bring
But I love you until....until...until,,,,
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by joel » February 14th, 2007, 11:10 pm

If I could write one verse to one love one time....

wow
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Post by Doreen Peri » February 15th, 2007, 12:16 pm

thank you for the lovely poem.
it is beautiful.
:)

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Post by e_dog » February 16th, 2007, 3:34 am

I think now we are all in love with doreen.

Or is it L-rod?

There so many people to love.

better than hating ones self. (but thats the Christian thing to do.)

after all.
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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Post by stilltrucking » February 17th, 2007, 5:10 pm

"When you're in love with a beautiful woman
It's hard
When you're in love with a beautiful woman
You know it's hard"


It must be even harder when she is silk to the touch and steel willed.

diamond minds flock together I suppose

lovely poem Clay
my heart goes out to you
I know its hard :wink:

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