Mr. Combinatorial

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Totenkopf

Mr. Combinatorial

Post by Totenkopf » May 23rd, 2007, 4:53 am

He gazes upon the pretty posts---
each one a collection of
propositions (whatevs those be,
ultimately), and content forms, frees, metaphors:
the SS Veritas pulls out from the docks
an icy Baltic B & W nazi night,
morpheme people on board
torpedo'd, the Ship
syntax and semantics
sinks, Capn' Unity going down
with the crew.................

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Post by stilltrucking » May 23rd, 2007, 9:33 am

another pretty post.

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Post by creativesoul » May 23rd, 2007, 11:17 am

people are embracing
sucking on tears and emotional need
the way you leave floats off my skin
i will only satisfy my memory
with your face

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Post by Totenkopf » May 23rd, 2007, 12:36 pm

are they? that's part of the prob.


Mr. Pathos aka Dionysius lives in Mr. Logos' dungeon (aka Apollo)in the Bone Palace of Necessity

und ruhig fliesst Der Rhine...................

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Post by hester_prynne » May 24th, 2007, 1:43 am

I never understand things like this, but it is attractive.
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by Totenkopf » May 24th, 2007, 8:44 am

thx Hes. Did you know there are about like 50 million blogs worldwide?? And about 100,000 are added each week. Think of all the sentences, words, expressions, propositions, in all the various languages, spewed today on blogs (or newspapers, pundits, Tee Vee), with little or no effect. The bandwidth used, or misused.

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