A drop of water

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hester_prynne
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A drop of water

Post by hester_prynne » August 13th, 2007, 8:38 pm

Swan dives.
Breast strokes.
Angled images,
all pummeling down.

Glorious sunrays,
blurred visions.
Insidiously, waitlessly,
you swim on to death.

Graceful in abandon,
awe yes, the slo-mo years.
But alas, alack,
the way up dwindles.

Disappears behind you,
into a darkening blur.
Crushes, crushes,
flattens you to pancake.

Squeezes, squeezes you,
to just a drop of water.
Soul ingredient needed,
for life to originate in.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by eugeneherman » August 13th, 2007, 8:58 pm

Hester, You write in such mellifluous lines, please sing some of those things even without your good piano backup. Those kinda things would be so wonderful to hear!

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Arcadia
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Post by Arcadia » August 14th, 2007, 6:33 pm

I totally agree with eugene!! beautiful poem!!

Totenkopf

Post by Totenkopf » September 28th, 2007, 6:16 pm

Way cool, HP.

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