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[Axanderdeath]

Round the back the house
gravel parking lot
summers hot
in halifax
relax the velvet under ground
play a song of heartbreaking in to thousands and the heart beats faster then
it should for indifference
the common break stood up at her own home
left alonewith friends and the music goes onit never stop
sand the heart poundsand feels like lumpsand siting waiting
like a fool
locked up in yourown mind
this is not the time. waiting
waiting
for your heart to break

[judih]

oh! bravo, geoff.
this is a song, excellent!
sand its a trip to hear this you

[jimboloco]

yeah i can see you growing
many strong years ahead
my hope for you
voice of dissaffection
supple and strong