heavy water

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e_dog
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heavy water

Post by e_dog » November 7th, 2007, 6:56 pm

poison sheets
poisoned drink
poison mind
doth think

your soul'd
drapery
vellum candy
ignition

poisoned dreams
decisions
words multifouled
unwrapper

poisoned candy
walking cane
sheets of ice
delicious death

drunk on
divinity
you wisen
livened

poisoned pills
antianecdotes
vellum drapery
vestaments under purpose

sweet copy
of my soul
sweeter poissons
than nectarines

crash
crush
creche
cache

yes you did this
but not to me
yes you did this
to yourself

poison
fish
swimming away
in it
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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hester_prynne
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Post by hester_prynne » November 8th, 2007, 3:06 am

There goes my gut again....
this is kick ass.

H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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stilltrucking
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Post by stilltrucking » November 8th, 2007, 4:16 am

good work e-dog

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