Patience

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Patience

Post by e_dog » December 13th, 2007, 3:08 am

"Are we in hell yet?" said the one.
"Stop asking me that," said the other. "Not yet."

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Post by e_dog » December 13th, 2007, 3:18 am

'Kay.

Oz.

Cay

Os.

Key

Ask.


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Je

Zus.

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't's us.
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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Post by mnaz » December 13th, 2007, 6:26 am

"When will we be in heaven?" said the one.
"Please keep asking," said the other. "Not Yet."

Close, though. Could go either way at this point.

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Post by Dave The Dov » December 16th, 2007, 6:56 am

How can you tell you're in either one????
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Post by e_dog » December 17th, 2007, 4:42 am

When you's on the way to hell
everything's hot.
Heaven, too.
That's how ya tell tha diffrence.
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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