box of flies

[alienpoet]

taking freak pie off the shelf
shoo the flies
spraying outdated whip cream on top
eating it faster than your lies
tom thumb dances in the pie pan
keeps me company

throwing eggs and tomatos on the wall
there see i'm feeling better
a productive day
writing you a chain letter
watch your box
wait for black Friday

smile.pretend i'm dead.

[hester_prynne]

oo oo oo whee!
I love this!

H

[mnaz]

Not so much black Friday, but endless gray, so it seems.
First four lines pack quite a punch. Thanks.

[e_dog]

whole thing kicks ass.

great pome.

[alienpoet]

Hey ,thanks !