Quintain - Falling...

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Quintain - Falling...

Post by jweeble » April 19th, 2008, 8:17 pm

Falling
into heartbreak
just as easily as
your smile, words, kiss had me falling
in love.
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Post by Doreen Peri » April 22nd, 2008, 3:36 pm

So true.

Every time I fell into one, I later fell into the other.

Enjoyed this poem.
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Post by hester_prynne » April 23rd, 2008, 7:56 pm

Yeah, I truly love this....
But.
I've found that just staying in heartbreak while falling is best.
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