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Post by » April 28th, 2005, 9:53 pm

fanning
fueling my
inner inferno
constant
constraint
blocking my
view
in my face
it's you
a breath of
fresh
fuck
from the
pnw
getting
into my head
a little
more everyday
but its ok
i'm diggin'
on you
digging in
with
bitten nails
that couldn't take hold
if my life depended on it.

sea child
i'll never see
you in a hundred years
til our alien
friends come
and take us both away.

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Post by judih » April 29th, 2005, 1:52 am

four degrees, i like this and it's effective, but what's a pnw?
a breath of
fresh
fuck
from the
pnw

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Post by » April 29th, 2005, 2:49 am

pacific north west, judih.
thanks for likin'.

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Post by judih » April 29th, 2005, 4:30 am

ah, seascapes from the pnw
i see
thanks

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Post by gypsyjoker » May 13th, 2008, 10:27 am

yeah man
beautiful poem
I know that feeling.
it gives me reason to live.

where you been?
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Post by » May 13th, 2008, 1:28 pm

i've been around.
that's what they say anyhow.
posting to a thread called '30 poems in 30 days' on literotica. so, i've actually done quite a bit of poeming. 99% shit, but still. i keep the gears greased and try not to write about the pnw, anymore.
thanks for asking, texan.

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