i am better than you

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Post by Doreen Peri » May 8th, 2008, 2:45 pm

I just clicked when I saw you post and i had the window open for quite a while while I was reading it. If you deleted it right away, it was just coincidental that i happened to hit it before it was removed. Unless I pushed refresh or reply or something, it would have stayed on that window forever! LOL!

glad you posted it separately!

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Post by mtmynd » May 8th, 2008, 5:41 pm

yabyum... tell me who put this idea in your head. i'll kick his fucking arse, australian style...

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Post by hester_prynne » May 9th, 2008, 4:20 pm

Better better better better better better better better better better better better
tiger tiger tiger tiger tiger tiger tiger tiger tiger tiger tiger tiger tiger tiger tiger
circle circle circle circle circle circle circle circle circle circle circle circle circle
butter butter butter butter butter butter butter butter butter butter butter butter
melting melting melting melting melting melting melting melting melting melting
sambo sambo sambo sambo sambo sambo sambo sambo sambo sambo sambo
pancakes pancakes pancakes pancakes pancakes pancakes pancakes pancakes
mmmmmgooood
goodisbetterthanbetter

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Post by gypsyjoker » May 9th, 2008, 4:31 pm

make my day hester
and you did
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Post by constantine » May 9th, 2008, 4:36 pm

pancakes are round and flat at the same fucking time! ain't that a kick in the head.

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Post by Doreen Peri » May 9th, 2008, 4:41 pm

just like the world, constandino

(and me, too ;))

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Post by gypsyjoker » May 9th, 2008, 4:42 pm

pi's R square

Peggy worked at
Sambo's Attascaderi California
called herself a social whore
serving those pancakes to all her friends
in her spare times she was a song writer
She wrote:
"They say I was rebel till I reached the age of five
It was then that I got caught up in the struggle to survive"
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Post by constantine » May 9th, 2008, 4:45 pm

well we surely have gotten our butter's worth. don't hit me.

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Post by gypsyjoker » May 9th, 2008, 4:47 pm

sorry dino
hate when that happens
I edited the hell out of while you were posting
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Post by Doreen Peri » May 9th, 2008, 4:48 pm

all syruptitious remarks welcome

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Post by constantine » May 9th, 2008, 4:56 pm

i just don't karo anymore.

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Post by Doreen Peri » May 9th, 2008, 5:04 pm

i think you've flipped....you did just a few minutes ago...

now you're waffling

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Post by hester_prynne » May 9th, 2008, 5:07 pm

I got molasses (sp?) on my glasses for sure....
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Post by YABYUM » May 14th, 2008, 6:18 am

moxie trots along long laughing lines of road i wear on my face.
you are not better than me.

if you think you are, i wouldnt be.
if i thought you were, you would be.

high boot marks stained soaked water tight laces, faces, races.

stiches turned my knowing so into scars.

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