the horrible solitude of nothingness

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mtmynd
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the horrible solitude of nothingness

Post by mtmynd » May 15th, 2008, 11:18 am

the horrible solitude of nothingness

you only fear
what you imagine
to be the
truth
whereas your reality
lies ten thousand miles
from
the truth
of
no-thing-ness

the bliss
of freedom
at the expense
of
reality
constructed
by ego
surviving
between ears
measured
by the
physical world

ignoring the
womb of silence
that births
matter
which contains
your infinite
Self


(horrible indeed!)

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Post by westcoast » May 15th, 2008, 11:02 pm

*the pause which refreshes*

i enjoyed this poem very much cecil. thank you for sharing.

~westie

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Post by mtmynd » May 16th, 2008, 12:06 pm

My pleasure, J.. Thank you! :wink:

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Post by constantine » May 16th, 2008, 12:33 pm

"lies ten thousand miles from the truth" - i agree. very provocative work and well-executed as well.

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Post by Arcadia » May 16th, 2008, 12:47 pm

I missed myself somewhere while reading it... :roll: !!!!!
nice poem!! :)

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Post by Doreen Peri » May 16th, 2008, 1:11 pm

you really should read that book oprah is promoting

fits in with many of your writings... can't remember the name of it but will find it and send it to you.... (i have the book in my bedroom.. will look in a bit)

I liked this part the best
ignoring the
womb of silence
that births
matter
which contains
your infinite
Self

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