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Bond, James Bond

Post by Lightning Rod » May 16th, 2008, 7:37 pm

back in the daze
when I was over seize
or spaced out in the service of my country
one small step from East Berlin
which was much like my girlfriend
all pent up inside

it was a night would make a spy yawn
global positioning was just a dream
I forgot to put the implant behind her ear
had to depend on questionable sources

In other words, I'm reduced to limited intelligence
but that's nothing new in this business
my gun is drinking greased cartridges
and I'm thinking on my feet
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by Doreen Peri » May 16th, 2008, 8:19 pm

is the first stanza a cut up?

interesting piece

trying to figure out what it means

lol

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Post by westcoast » May 16th, 2008, 11:41 pm

quirky.
one small step from East Berlin
which was much like my girlfriend
all pent up inside
got a good chuckle with this.

~westie

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Post by constantine » May 17th, 2008, 10:38 am

pretty wild - i like the mix of political satire and gender relations.

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Post by Lightning Rod » May 17th, 2008, 11:06 am

doreen, you know I'm always cuttin' up

westie, I like that joke too. That's why I call my baby East Berlin.

dino, yeah Ian Flemming had a great grip on gender relations....haha
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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