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jump back, jack

Post by Doreen Peri » May 23rd, 2008, 12:24 am

gotta jump back, jack,
turn around in the sound saddle,
rattle the eardrums off her,
cough or sing or ring a-ding
or some such thing to get
the attention of the deaf....
how could anyone forget
that left foot right foot lead, man,
damn it! it's kinetic! memory's in
the doin', the motion, the madness,
the cagney impression, not to mention
the athletic perspective, the poetic invective,
and the goddamn chant of
neat, petite, sweet ...
life is like a museum on a side street,
gotta get away, gotta go out and play,
do the tango, the ooo pappa fandango,
trip the fantastico light, bro,
go go go, ya got it goin' on!
do the jitterbug, the wa-wa-watusi, da hip-hop
fox trot, do it in the mornin', do it 'til ya drop,
it's a wild world out there, gomez,
pay homage to the dead, rise up instead,
hold onto yer heart, make some banana bread,
wrap yer bandana on yer head, and jam man!
no need to make a wish fer dear morticia,
she's doin' the vamp with a cloud somewhere...
do the funky monkey if ya dare!
it ain't fair but it's a blast ... sky's bright
not overcast ... drive dat convertable buggy and park it.
check ya out in the supermarket!


may 2008

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Post by saw » May 23rd, 2008, 7:52 am

aah the music of living...nice effort, upbeat with sustained drive....
oh, so that was you checkin' me out at the supermarket....hi doreen
Lots of feelgood sounds in this one, you should hook up with Wireman.

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hey YOU!

Post by the mingo » May 23rd, 2008, 10:33 am

**Sparkle on the Monkey Train**

! INCESSANT !...a wop bop a dowop a wop bop bam!...whew! i had to have a smoke and take a nap after reading this...
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by Doreen Peri » May 23rd, 2008, 11:44 am

i see saw!
wireman and i have been boogyin for years now
and yeah, baby, that was me checkin' ya out
at the register.... plastic or paper? ;)

.....

mingo mingo bo bingo
bo nanna fanna fo fingo
feee fie fo fingo
MINGO!
smoke one fer me
and gimme a little snooze too,
i appreciate you!

:D


....

thanks for dancin with me, you two! :)

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Post by constantine » May 23rd, 2008, 12:12 pm

sounds like good advice. gomez is cool with that.

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Post by hester_prynne » May 23rd, 2008, 2:11 pm

Hester is cool with this.
Doreen, you never fail to amaze me...
see you in the meat department?
chops? You got em......
:D .

H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by Doreen Peri » May 23rd, 2008, 9:24 pm

constandino - let's do da rhumba! ;)

hestie - we've got to stop meating like this. ;)

thanks for reading and your kind replies, you 2

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Post by westcoast » May 23rd, 2008, 9:27 pm

hot, D!!

~westie

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