Poetic Tango

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goldenmyst
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Poetic Tango

Post by goldenmyst » June 16th, 2008, 10:03 pm

The river of words courses
Through my June mind
Following a fluid path
Into golden meadows of verse
Each meandering thought
Twinkling like a star
Lost in the cosmic fugue
Our lyrical dance
Unfolding in improvisational dreams
Our visions linked in fiesta frolic
Each voice echoing
A note in our song

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Post by saw » June 17th, 2008, 6:37 am

seems like a place I'd like to visit, john....how do I get there?
beautiful sentiment with real conservation...quite a skill.......
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by Arcadia » June 17th, 2008, 1:48 pm

fluid writing-tango!!!! :)

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Post by hester_prynne » June 17th, 2008, 7:08 pm

On a canoe, floatin down the river of your mind.....that's what readin this is like...
A beaut, no doubt friend...
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by westcoast » June 17th, 2008, 10:10 pm

lovely john!

~westie

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Post by goldenmyst » June 18th, 2008, 9:40 am

Saw, I don't often get there either. Thanks!

Arcadia, glad you liked the fluidity!

Hester, I love to canoe down streams. Mind canoeing is great too.

Westcoast, a lovely comment from a lovely friend. ;)

John

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Post by constantine » June 18th, 2008, 10:06 am

again, nicely done - your spirit comes through with each poem you write.

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