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Post by westcoast » July 9th, 2008, 3:40 pm

i am not Lot's wife.

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Post by mnaz » July 9th, 2008, 3:53 pm

Yes. Keep going. Never look back!

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Post by stilltrucking » July 9th, 2008, 4:36 pm

Lot's Wife~
Anna Akhmatova
Who will grieve for this woman? Does she not seem
too insignificant for our concern?
Yet in my heart I never will deny her,
who suffered death because she chose to turn.
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Post by Doreen Peri » July 9th, 2008, 4:59 pm

the plot thickens

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Post by constantine » July 9th, 2008, 5:26 pm

doesn't it always. stir the pot and see what comes to the top. no salt please.

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Post by hester_prynne » July 9th, 2008, 8:52 pm

She didn't die....she was reborn.
The ones left behind always say you died.
:shock:
H 8)
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Post by mtmynd » July 9th, 2008, 11:17 pm

makes two of us.

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Post by Lightning Rod » July 9th, 2008, 11:21 pm

you may not be Lot's wife, westie
but I'll bet you would be a lot of wife.

:lol:

(sorry about the salty joke)
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Post by westcoast » July 9th, 2008, 11:30 pm

lol... i love it!

~westie

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Post by Lightning Rod » July 9th, 2008, 11:36 pm

how could I resist a straight line like this?

ba dah boom
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Post by saw » July 10th, 2008, 5:35 pm

see how easy it is to write a poem when you set your mind to it...
enough said to stimulate the neurons and that's all ya need..
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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