the garden (of the republic)

[Arcadia]

Taquirari & cumbia
(I couldn´t see the gold threads
in her neck)
gossips, locro & empanadas
grey misty flat river from the window
indoors
laughters
indoors
(tomorrow)


El jardín (de la república)

Taquirari & cumbia
(no pude ver los hilos de oro
en su cuello)
chismes, locro & empanadas
río gris, neblinoso y chato a través de la ventana
adentro
risas
adentro
(mañana)

[Lightning Rod]

lovely, Arcadia

if I had any sense I would learn Spanish

it's the most poetic language

but alas, tu peridido

[constantine]

sounds beautiful in spanish, and your translation holds up well.

[saw]

I dig it !.....lyrical and seductive.....nice work...

[Arcadia]

peridido? what´s that?
it was only spanish, cozy independence otium & bad weather!, thanks for reading!

[WIREMAN]

ah the language is so liquid....enjoyed very much arcadia......

[Lightning Rod]

peridido? what´s that?
it was only spanish, cozy independence otium & bad weather!, thanks for reading!

sorry, I meant perezozo
but I was going for the diminuative

like I said, I should learn espanol