Endless Reverie

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Endless Reverie

Post by goldenmyst » July 16th, 2008, 9:44 pm

The sycophants gather like vultures whose rapacious feast convenes in climactic bursts of beastly devouring, furnace belly bellows burning with desire in the midnight orgy enveloped by darkness like dying widows falling into melancholic seizures of memory no roads leading outward from the sanctum of sanity trapped till the end in endless reverie.

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Post by Doreen Peri » July 16th, 2008, 10:17 pm

whew! long sentence!

I've had a poem called "sycophant" in the works for months.

I like that word "rapacious"...now i have to look it up.

Midnight orgy you say? what fun!

nice alliteration

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Post by mtmynd » July 16th, 2008, 11:26 pm

you're on a roll, John. are these (2) new pieces or some things you've been working on for awhile and they finally came together? me gusta!

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Post by goldenmyst » July 16th, 2008, 11:33 pm

Doreen, I look forward to reading your "Sycophant" poem. Thanks dear for reading my ranting and raving. lol

mtmynd, these are two completely new pieces. I wrote them in the last few days. I enjoy walks in the fringe. :)

John

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Post by hester_prynne » July 17th, 2008, 12:04 pm

"sanity trapped till the end in endless reverie."
this is one of those lines that makes me lean forward in awe.
Bravo man.
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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